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  1. Janab mubark hu kahani shuro krne ki. Abi kahani k bary main kuch nai keh skty Q k abi to bas taruf hu rha ha.
  2. Welcome sir . Or Mubarak hu ap b is forum ka hissa banne ja rhy han.hum lekh nai skty lekan lekhne walon ki qadar zaror krte han. Or janab main ne ap se nai kaha tha k ap kahani ko x movie ki trha lekho ge. Update ka Intazar rhy ga. Umeed krta hun k jald he update aaye gi..
  3. Jahan tak Babar khan ne lekhi thi main ne sari parhi thi . Phr wo gaib hu gaye . Us k bad taqreeban kam iz kam 1 sal nad ek new id se ek update aai lambhi c us main ne batya k Barbar ki mangetar ne apna koi bhanja bhatija nai chora .or un k alwa or b boht saron se us ka sex thy. Jb Babar ko pata chala to us ne khudkhusi kr li. Phr us ne end pe batya k wo Babar ki mangetr yani bv ha . Wo bs ye sab batne k leye zindha thi ab wo b khudkhusi kr rhi ha ........ Ab phr se Story Maker bhai ne shuro ki ha. Janab ap b is kahani ko utna he lekho ge ya phr end kro ge ?
  4. Janab ye sorty DR saab k pas rehne do. Ap is ka part 2 lekh lo. Ya koi or kahani lekhna shuro kr do. yahn pe to kisi ko ye b pata nai ha k ap k lekhne ka andaz kya ha.. Jb ap apni koi kahani lekho ge to logon ko ap k lekhne ka andaz b pata chal jaye ga or ye b pata chal jaye ga k ap kesa lekhty hu. DR Saab boht he umdha andaz se is kahani ko agye le kar ja rhy han. Or ek bat jo b keh rhy han k ap ye kahani lekho wo b is leye keh rhy han Q k un ko bs update se mtlab hota ha.un k leye ye kahani bs ek x movie ki trha ha . Q k wo aj tak kahani ko smjh he nai paye k DR Saab kya lekh rhy han . Un k leye jo b lekha hota ha wo bs alfaz hoty han wo smjhne ki koshish nai krte . Ap un logon k leye koi story shuro kr lo. Her roz ki bajaye din main 2 se 3 updates dena. Ap bs is story ko Dr Saab k pas rehne do.....
  5. Janab ap ye story DR saab k pas he rhne do.ap ko lekhna he ha to kuch or lekh lo.jo b aata ha isi kahani k peche par jata ha. Janab ap itne bary writer k assistant thy. Ap ko chye k ap apni koi kahani lekho.is kahani ko DR saab se behtar koi nai lekh skta. Ap se guzarish ha k ap apni koi kahani shuro kro. Sukria janab
  6. Admin sir ki bat belkul sahi ha .ap imran series sex addition shuro kro . Ap k kehne k.mutabiq ap lekh skty hu. To ap yehe lekho .
  7. Janab ap ko juma juma 10 din nai howe aaye howe . Or aaty he kahani ko end krne ki ratt laga di ha . Bhai itni he jaldi ha to khud Q nai lekhna shuro kr dety . Phr hum b dekhine k kya teer marty hu. Or agr DR sab na hoty to pata nai ye kahni kis koone main pari shar rhi hoti. Or Ap k janab to 3 bar kahani ko chor k bhag gaye . Ye to DR sab ki meharbani ha k unhon ne is kahani ko sahara deya or is ko char chand laga deye . Her insan ki apni life b hoti ha .kam dhanda b dekhna hota ha . Or abroad ki life pakistan jesi life nai ha .Hum logon ka kya ha aaye 2 minutes main kahanai parhi or chly gaye . Agly din aaye to shuro hu gaye update update update.... Bhai itni he aag lagi hoi ha to chuly pe beth jao.take aag thandi hu jaye. Or bhai bura laghta ha tmhen to laghta rhy .
  8. Sab ko eid Mubarak.... Admin g Ye b post kr k delete kr dena... Sukria.....
  9. Bhai logo DR Saab ka b khyal kaiy kro . Unhon ne sochni hoti ha sorty . Phr record kr k agye behjni hoti ha wahn se wapsi pe tarteeb deni hoti ha . Phr us ki tashee krni hoti ha . Or phr mamlaty zindghi b hoty han . Ap logo ko pata b hota ha k update aane he ha . Lekan phr b update update ki ratt lagai rakhty hu . Thora sa hosly se kam leya krooo..... agr hosla nai kr skty to khud lekhne beth jaya kro.take pata chly k ye ye asan kam nai hai.... Agr kisi bhai ko bura lagye to lagta rhy .
  10. Good start . Dekhna bhai 2 . 4 updates de k gaib he na hu jana . Q k boht sare writers ase he krte han.
  11. Wo papers dene main busy han .....jese he wo farig hun gen . Yahn aa k de den gi . Update
  12. کہانی سیکس سے زیادہ اب ایڈونچر ہوتی جا رہی ہے ۔اب ایکشن ہی ایکشن ہوگا۔۔۔۔۔۔بہت خوب ڈاکٹر صاحب آپ کا جواب نہیں ۔۔۔۔۔۔
  13. Boht he zabrdast update....super ..... Lo g DR sab ne sab ki Umeedon pe pani phair deya ........
  14. Sir g aqalmand insan wohe hota ha .jo kutton k bhonkne pe side se guzar jata ha . Ab logon ko or jaga nai mil rhi kuch kehne k leye .q k jahan ja k ye log taty outhaty thy wo sab jaga band hu gi han . To ab ye kam wo yahen kren gen bhonk k. Or sir jahan ase log han wahn ap k chane waly b han.....
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